Subject: Re: Japanese emails for review
From: Pritish Nandi <[email-masked]>
To: deeksha <[email-masked]>
Cc: tasuku yamamoto <[email-masked]>, saurabh <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 8 Nov 2019 00:09:04 -0700 (MST)

Hi Deeksha, 

Attached is the doc format. 

Regards, 
Pritish 

From: "deeksha" <[email-masked]> 
To: "tasuku yamamoto" <[email-masked]> 
Cc: "Pritish Nandi" <[email-masked]>, "saurabh" <[email-masked]> 
Sent: Friday, 8 November, 2019 12:32:51 
Subject: Re: Japanese emails for review 

Please send it in .doc format 

Sent from my iPhone 

On 8 Nov 2019, at 12:30, tasuku yamamoto < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] > wrote: 

Hi Deeksha 

Kindly find the details of my drafting. 

Regards 
Tasuku 

From: "tasuku yamamoto" < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] > 
To: "deeksha" < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] > 
Cc: "Pritish Nandi" < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] >, "saurabh" < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] > 
Sent: Friday, 8 November, 2019 11:38:18 
Subject: Re: Japanese emails for review 

Hi Deeksha, 

Here are the example which we could have used and the sentences in business level. 

お元気ですか！ (How are you) We don’t use this as business conversation. We could have used like this 

( お世話になっております / お世話になります） 

頑張ってね ！ (We never use as greetings) 

送信する画像が小さすぎて 、その中の何もはっきりと見えることができません。 

(The image to sending you is too small) 

受け取った画像では確認できませんので It should be (We are not able to check with the image received) 

問題を再現するために必要な必須情報であるため、 les mills のユーザー名も送信してください。 

大変申し訳ございませんが問題点を解決する為にお客様の Virtual のユーザー名を教えていただけますでしょうか。 

Regards 
Tasuku 

From: "tasuku yamamoto" < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] > 
To: "deeksha" < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] > 
Cc: "Pritish Nandi" < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] >, "saurabh" < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] > 
Sent: Friday, 8 November, 2019 10:54:27 
Subject: Re: Japanese emails for review 

Hi Deeksha 

The emails which was sent was not translated by my side. 

Also as their comments some of the sentences were not used in a business conversation. 

Yes it was not appropriate sentence for business conversation level. 

Regards 
Tasuku 

From: "deeksha" < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] > 
To: "tasuku yamamoto" < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] >, "Pritish Nandi" < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] >, "saurabh" < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] > 
Sent: Friday, 8 November, 2019 10:22:43 
Subject: Fwd: Japanese emails for review 

Sent from my iPhone 

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From: Charlotte Jansen < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] > 
Date: 8 November 2019 at 09:28:36 GMT+5:30 
To: deeksha < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] > 
Cc: saurabh < [ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] > 
Subject: FW: Japanese emails for review 

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Hi Deeksha, 

We’ve raised the issue with the Japanese emails to a third party for their thoughts, according to them the emails are being google translated but what’s concerning is that our native speaker at Livesalesman can only spot two minor errors. Is our dedicated Japanese agent a Japanese person? 

I’m not sure of Japanese culture myself but there seems to be a difference between business emails and personal style emails in Japan. 

What are your thoughts on this because at the moment we can’t have Yamamoto replying to emails if the grammar is incorrect. 

Thanks 

Charlotte 

	

	

	

Charlotte Jansen ​ 	

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Customer Support B2B 

Les Mills International 	

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[ mailto:[email-masked] | [email-masked] ] 

[ http://www.lesmills.com/ | www.lesmills.com ] 

[ https://www.lesmills.com/getbodycombat ] 

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