Subject: Re: Salary
From: Swati Shukla <[email-masked]>
To: Prabhat Anand <[email-masked]>
Cc: Vaishali Sah <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 21 Jul 2017 09:38:22 +0530 (IST)

Hello Mr. Prabhat 

You will be receiving a cheque for your June month's salary. I will inform you once your cheque would be ready. 

Further you need to choose your words better. As instead of making a request to release your salary you are writing a mail as if you are ordering me. So please be careful in your future mails. 

Best Regards 
Swati Shukla 

From: "Prabhat Anand" <[email-masked]> 
To: "Swati Shukla" <[email-masked]> 
Sent: Thursday, July 20, 2017 8:53:24 PM 
Subject: Salary 

Hi Ma'm, 

This is to remind you that my joining date was 17th of June, 2017 and according to that, my salary should be credited by 24th of July, 2017. Please act accordingly and let me know if there is any concern. 

Regards, 
Prabhat Anand